by Jessica Sep 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A white envelope lies silently beneath the empty bed |
This is so sadddd i began to cry when i read it This poem is very well written |
This was a trully sad poem. The story had such an impact on me. Secrets are a bad thing to keep. The flow and rhythm was flawless, and the imagery great. Well done. |
It wasn't much a sad poem as it was a short story in a way. I did like the idea about the secrets being in an unread letter, kind of how we keep secrets inside we wish to share but do not feel safe to. |
by BlueDreams
Jesse, what a beautiful sad penned your potray here! simply but well express emotions, well done! |
by Megann Lee
Wow..Jessy this is amazing. I enjoyed it. I thought it was very detailed, and I got what you where writting about, it was sad aswell. All the emotions where so raw and fresh.. Great work. |