by Audrey Sep 23, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Entwined the bleak and weary |
by Sarah Ann
Wonderful poem, you may think it is slightly undeveloped, but I believe it's coming along well. |
Short and sweet. i liked the fluid references to falling into liquid harmony. really kool. i liked reding this. nice and kool. |
Very good.. can't wait for the next one.. |