Wow.. vivid imagery.. vocabulary is fantastic, and the emotion and depth are amazing! Lovely, simply lovely.

Wow. just..... wow. Amazing. I loved it. mature and beautiful. once again, fluid and strangely frightening. loved it. beautiful and grotesque at the same time.
xoxoxoxox

This is really good. i loved it
good job

Good one. Deep and haunting. Keep it up.

Mysterious scenes Youve created here.
A very good read indeed.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

God Bless!