by Megann Lee Sep 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Take it back, baby please. |
This one wasn't as well written as the other one and the flw wa sa bit rocky. Maybe add in some more details to make this poem more concrete. |
by Jessica
Awhh, another very sad poem! I loved the title, very catchy.. But I kind of felt that the rest of the poem was a little bland compared to that.. I just kind of read over the words and didn't register them.. Maybe add in a little more detail to make it more effective.. Nice job though 4/5 |
by Natalie
Wowee-- You know what? I reckon this poem would work REALLY well as a song. It just had this song feel to it, ya know? |
by mysterious_x
This is really good. I like the title even more so. |
by Tammie
I like this alot. The title is good and you used it well to work in with the poem. I can relate alot to this poem. Lies like that, especially being told that they love you, when they really don't, hurts so much. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5 |