by Tammie
Thats so sad. You did a wonderful job of writing that, i feel sad for you, if it is about you. If not, you did a great job in writing it, so much raw emotion. Great poem. Keep it up. =] 5/5 |
by mysterious_x
I like the way you can express your thoughts so easily. :] |
by Natalie
Stories I won't forgot. |
Aww. It's ok, hun. Don't fret about it. =) Just keep your chin up and look forward to something new every day. |
by Jessica
Awh, that was good sweetie.. I loved the last line best, it had so much power and just sadness at the same time.. The flow was pretty good and the descriptions were great.. Very nicely done hunny! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by AshLetitia
You are talented |
by tiffany
I liked it alot. i loved your first paragraph! |
Awwwwww. this was a really good poem, i like it alot, hit me back |
by Emily
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by Emily
Blah. I love your poem. Its good. |
by Silkenscarf
I to know what it's like to look in a mirror and hate what you see. It feels like your sinking, or falling or maybe both... Anyway, great poem! |
Yet your poem, so far from imperfection... |
Ohhh i love that last line, very deep |