Comments : Perfection Reflections.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Thats so sad. You did a wonderful job of writing that, i feel sad for you, if it is about you. If not, you did a great job in writing it, so much raw emotion. Great poem. Keep it up. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mysterious_x

    I like the way you can express your thoughts so easily. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Stories I won't forgot.

    [I think this line would work better if you had "forget" instead of "forgot"]

    This was a really sad poem, Megan. And sadly I can relate alot. I know exactly what it's like to look in the mirror and hate what you see. If you ever need to talk, I be here, ok?

    The poem was great though. I really really liked it! Awesome job, hun. Keep it up & smile. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. It's ok, hun. Don't fret about it. =) Just keep your chin up and look forward to something new every day.

    I thought the flow was a bit off in places, and that there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes that could easily be fixed. But I liked the story, and how you described your reflection far from perfection. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was good sweetie.. I loved the last line best, it had so much power and just sadness at the same time.. The flow was pretty good and the descriptions were great.. Very nicely done hunny! Keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    You are talented

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I liked it alot. i loved your first paragraph!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    Awwwwww. this was a really good poem, i like it alot, hit me back

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    Blah. I love your poem. Its good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Silkenscarf

    I to know what it's like to look in a mirror and hate what you see. It feels like your sinking, or falling or maybe both... Anyway, great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yet your poem, so far from imperfection...

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Ohhh i love that last line, very deep

    ~britt (MD)