Great poem. Such emotion and imagery. Keep writing. Thank you so much for your praise. I cherish it.

lots of love
hayley

Luanne, i agrre with the comment above me, this was beautiful penned once again you potray here, oh my....if i could write like this, that would be great, have to learned sometimes....anyway, i hope you have a great weekend, take care...best wishes from west, bert ~

This was such an exceptionally done piece of art. Loved your style. The form and content was beautiful. I was trully awe struck. Beautiful thoughts running through your mind. We should all be so lucky. Great job.

Thanks for entering my contest and congratulations. Trully amazing poem.

This is beautiful, Luanne! I adore the structure and every line is so honest, so pure. Many of us could relate to this piece.

"For...
constantly juggling a million words in my head
is unbearably painful"
^^^ Perfectly worded, especially the last line. Love it!

Luanne you have clearly outdone yourself with this poem. I always expect high calibre poetry from you but this is well WOW. The structure is unique and I love that, I cant say I have seenh anything quite like it within this site. Your use of words and imagery is brilliant and the message within your words holds such truth to it...poets never really do sleep my dear :O) And you are one of the few true poets...you should be most proud of this piece Luanne :o) Luv Always Risa xoxo

Wow! This was another excellent write from you. I loved the way each staza begin with the word to spell out your message: If I could release these thoughts for one day. Brilliant! You have a wonderful talent and I'm glad that I'm able to read such excellent work. 5/5 Welcome to my fav's. I don't want to miss out on any of you masterpieces.

Letty

Luanne
What a wonderful poem :) Excellent choice for the readers choice.
Take care thinking of you.
Cindy

Luanne
Again congrats on the readers choice award again for this excellent piece :)