Clever structure that works well for this poem. Good use of vocab and over all a nice poem. =] Keep it up.

This was much better. really beautiful. really well set out. 5/5 for sure.

Very nicely done I like the idea of this one

I like that it sounds so great.. i never write poems about nature yet let me try later hehe.. another great poem kabs im so impress 5/5

ingat..!

Beautiful penned, oh my...wonder of nature! simply but flowed with beautiful written, well done!

A step backwards in this piece that serves as a great building block and a break from the average. Excellent structure and creative, easy and unique format that make the poem easy on the eyes as well as the mind.

Crafty use of words, meanings and punctuations. A good 5/5 at the very least.

(Brilliant metaphors, by the way.)

[Tragic]

I like the very original style! It was very unique. I liked the vocab once again, and it was wonderfully written. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow ur really good poet! another 5/5 for me

That was a very calm poem...something to read and read and you can't get too tired of it. If you need to calm down, i think this is the perfect poem...good job...i liked how you said that the things "play"..it was really creative:)5/5

Dangle and dazzle!
((I think a better word could be used here instead of 'dangle'...))
When nature plays..
Marvel and wonder
Is it the work of God?
or is it God itself
((I LOVED This..the ending was so perfect!!!))

Wow...your nature poems describe and say so much in just a few words. Which is amazing. I really enjoyed this poem...I have never read anything like it before. And usually I do not like broken formatting, but this just fit the poem perfectly. Wonderful job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Another profoundly beautiful poem filled with natural imagery

Creative style. I loved the delicate details you put into the short lines.

Another great poem, you are a talented poet. great job, another 5/5 from me.

Wow...This was beautifully written..I
could imagine each scene as I read
each stanza. You painted the perfect
picture and that is what a great poet
does. you are one of the best and I
hope you know it. I give you five star's
but I wish I could give you more. How
did you learn to write so well? Keep up the excellent work. I've got my eye's on you..lol.

Your new friend
Letty

This is a wonderfully written poem. good job. 5/5

I like the imagry in this poem. its really nice, its smooth to read and the end as a question fits perfectly. it all works togeather, bravo! i've read some of your other poems and they're all really well written, but i must say so far this is my favorite.