Haunted Carnivals

by Jessica   Sep 23, 2006


Black ominously closing in on the joyous sun
Wheels slowly spin and creek in the silent wind
The ghostly nights haunting has unfortunately begun
Joy and happiness, against a wall is forcefully pinned..

Lurking grimly in the shadows, gleefully they emerge
Cans and papers skidding across the graveyard of pleasure
Eerie noises, wicked spirits, slowly the area they submerge
Sinister figures wander the carnival grounds at their leisure..

Prowling the area, searching for bodies of their own
Popcorn machines and rides they leave their marks upon
Slowly the sun rises again, hunting they have to postpone
Pure evil yet also good, the haunted carnival lives on..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow...very well expressed, nice imagery, well written. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    It was a nice dark poem that I would suggest turning into a short story, it might sound better that way. You have some unique descriptions to set your tone.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Now this I add to my long lines of favourite poems.
    Good Work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wowee-- Jessy! Very dark poem. ;P

    A haunted Carnival.. now that scares me. Tehe. I'm NEVER gonna go to one every again now cause of this poem, tehe!

    It was very nicely done. Great flow and awesome word usuage. Just simply great as per usual. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    O.O

    Very original. You have a far fetched imagination lol. Great job. I liked the idea of the things making the swings creak. -shivers- Reminds me of a horror movie lol. Keep it up. I loved it! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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