by Lenny Sep 23, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Dribbling like honey from a spoon, |
by Drew Gold
Very interesting metaphor you've woven into this; the gravy and food contrasts with the "cutting" theme. I'm not sure I like this; I mean I like both parts, the imagery and such, but not where they meet. It's a bit weird to think of the two hand-in-hand. I applaud you for writing it th0 because I know from the past how it feels. |