Numb

by XxFallenxFromxGracexX   Sep 23, 2006


I see you crying and i long to touch your face
Sometimes the memories of sadness are to hard to erase
I hear you scream from the pain of tomorrow
My silent words to you want to heal your sorrow
I feel the coldness around you , you used to be so warm
A thousand days in the rain, millions of nights spent in the storm
I never knew this is who you would become
Some one so bitter, so pained, so...numb...

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  • 14 years ago

    by morgan

    This poem was great. i loved it because sadly it describes me. and it had soo much feeling behind it. great job lol. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Esther

    P.s. The flow and rhyming scheme are awesome, this poem flows like a stream running downhill. Continuously.

  • 15 years ago

    by Esther

    I like it, like a downward spiral, you can not or could not predict this, but what if you could, I'm wondering if your writing this about yourself, some one you know or a fictional character.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved the last two lines, I thought those were really powerful and moving.
    Yet another excellent piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Wow great poem! i loved the desciption and the emotion is soo strong and very clear! well done. dont stop writing coz ill keep on reading!! :)

    sophie:)

    ps. thanx soo much 4 the comment.i really appreciate it

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