You always write better when you spill out your feeling, maybe you should dedicate the poem t that person.

This was a nice poem too...i enjoyed it greatly. Your a great poet! a natural! Jpoet*

Oh my....goodness. I am speechless. I really love how you wrote this. The rythym was GREAT and the words killed me. This is 5 star writting. Exellent.

One of the best ive read.
i really liked the way you put things
=]

Thats good it reminds me of what i did like a few weeks ago. my friend died, i was sad for like a week and i miss him and this reminds me of that time. i greived alot./..

That's really good. Really sad, but very well written. 5/5

xxxCasey J.

Great poem there is a lot of heart sould and emotion in it! It is a very true and relateable poem which makes it even better!

-AnnMARIE

Lovely...very good.

I like this it shows a lot of emotion i like

Very Well Done babe..
Good work..
Thank you for writing this..
It remains me of me and my best friend.. : )
Thank you..
MwaH..XoxO..

Very good...Harder than not saying goodbye,
Is seeing them before they leave,
Having the chance to say goodbye,
But all you did was grieve. is my favorite line ...keep writing...

I LOVE this peom Christie so much! You defiaatley need to keep on writing because ur so good! I really LOVE this poem!!!! I felt this one!

Im going thru thios right now, so this made me cry :'( guys shouldent cry but im not made of stone and im only human, loved the poem 5/5

I like this poem...thnx

OMG i'm nearly crying. so much pain and unwanted hurt. i can relate in some ways. u have true talent. i love what u write. love willow xxoo