This is brlliant!
v. v. good!!!
..xx

I like this piece, its kind of like compulsive eating disorder…

It’s very well written throughout the piece, the content is clear and it has a good rhythm. The plot it good, clearly expressed throughout

5/5

This one amused me.
Lmao.
Good Job!

"I repeat, some people think it's rude
Think i eat too much food
Oh god, i weigh 20 stone
I should diet-but first let me have that Ice cream cone. "

The above lines are my favorites.

Lol, aww.. That was funny but kind of sad.. Hehe.. Nicely done sweetie, it made me smile and that has to be good when I'm in this bad of a mood.. =P

Loved it it was great well expressed :):)keep it up and ill keep reading plz r/r/c on some of my stuff please thnx xxx alex xxx

Ha ha ha...thats a funny poem...that was good..i suck at funny poems:P...good job:)

Thank you so much I needed a laugh
right now. This was a bery well written
poem. I'm actually still laughing right
now. It kind of sounds like a commercial for people that are over-
weight. I liked the rythm and the
style of it. 5/5

Keep up the excellent work.
Letty

Lol...haha this was very funny...i needed a laugh too since i was in a very bad mood so yeh great poem! I liked it very much! Keep up the great work!

-*-Tormented

LOL i really liked this, it just applies to loads of people. Nice one.

Haha I love it!

It's like an endless cycle with some people, they get stressed so they eat, and then they aren't in shape, so they stress more, and then they eat more.

That's what it made me think of anyways. Good job.

Wow. Can totally relate to this. Unfortunatly, I didn't have any humor about it, lol. Looking at it in a past light, though, it is funny now.

I like the part 'I eat lots and lots of food, no one would ever want to see me nude'. It's ironically funny.

~Scarlett

Cool unexpected lol i liked it rhyming bit simple buti guess its whats needed for a funny poem lol nice one xxx alex xxx (4)

HEY GREAT JOB!!!i thought it was way funny....and it describes me and my friend!!!hehe but only the part about eating a lot....were cheerleaders and work are asses off! but this is really funny and u should def keep up the good work. thx 4 the comment
andi

LOL!!!
Love that stanza, its really good! Well done! Good Flow and rhyming!! Awsome Poem!
Love Mez!