Comments : Make me a promise.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chloe [*]

    Aww.. this poem is good.. :)
    Promises mean so Much to Me.. Thank you for writting this.. well done.. :)
    MwaH..XoxO..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Very cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my...this was beautfiul penned..lovely, passionate..o breathtaking write...beautful express emotion! well done.

    Make me a promise,
    And make me believe.
    Make me a promise,
    Say you'll never leave.

    best wishes from west,... bert ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Papoose

    Great poem, you got talent fo real, you should defianatly do something with your poetry i think i could get you somewhere. and thank you for the comment, it really means alot to here a person acknowledge my message, alot people ain't listenin, they just read fast looking for catchy rhymes that sound good, but they don't pay attention to whats really being said. thanks for listening, well in this case reading, but you found what i was trying to say, if you want to find out more about me go to, www.PapooseOnline.com the greatest website of all time. support me if you can. thanks Papoose-Pap-poose, Thug-A-Cation

  • 18 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    Ooh boy i love this so much great job thanks for the comment! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by William Hulley

    If I were your man, I'd make you a promise and do what I can, to keep your hand.

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I've only read two of your poems and I've loved them both. It seems as though we view love the same and you did a beautiful job describing it. It's simple yet good. Keep it up!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    P.s. You're on my favorites : )

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    I'll always be your WOman.