Good Bye

by X2892   Sep 23, 2006


No more
will I pour
tears and blood
together and flood
myself in it.

It is my choice
and voice
that tells me
I will see death today.

I just couldnt
tell no one that
I felt pain
every god dam day.
To bad that I
kepted it hidden.

Once again...

No more
will I pour
tears and blood
together and flood
myself in it.

This is my last
time I will
keep cutting
and hurting
myself because
this knife
will take my
life away!

Too bad its
not going to
make a difference
because I will burn in hell.

Too bad I didnt have
a happy ended.

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAZMINE A C

    This is a other good one i give u a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, the emotions were strong and raw. One thing I will suggest is to use more imagery, flowery words and less fill words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is reallyy sad, but i like it a lot. and i can relate to it, as i cut too and hide my pain. but you did a wonderful job writing this. keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awsome poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Aww its really good!! great job!! keep writtin and if u ever wanna talk my hotmail addy is loveaholic145@hotmail.com or my yahoo is lil_mel93@yahoo.com

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