Wow i cant beleive that you want to leave everyone behind i mean i wanted to do this before and like yeah

Well this was so sad i feel so touch...very wonderful poet i believe u can write more so just keep up the good work god bless5/5

Really good...can relate to it and thats what I like about it most....good work

Aww i really love this poem. it has such irony in it. im not sure whether or not your poem is about yourself, or it was just somthing u decided to write about, but either way it sends a good message. and i hope that in the end if its true, you learn to not do it, beucase like you said, its only taking your life away. xoxo Samantha. please comment my poems too! specially the newest one A Vague Truth

I can definately relate. Very good job. You're a very good poet. Keep up the good work. God Bless xxxCasey J.

Thats what i mean!!! you see? ive been there-way more than just once, and not proud of it but, i got better! do you talk to anyone about how you feel?

--ally

Hmmm....I thought the flow was a little off in places, and that threw me off a lot. I also thought that the idea of blood running down your arms and a knife taking away your life was a little on the gruesome side for me. But it kind of reminds me of me when I used to self harm. Just keep your chin up. If you need someone to talk to, I always welcome PMs. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

The emotion and depth were very well written. Nicely done..

I liked and it was emotional and well written!!

good job

Thanks for you c/r
-Josiah

I liked and it was emotional and well written!!

good job

Thanks for you c/r
-Josiah

Aww its really good!! great job!! keep writtin and if u ever wanna talk my hotmail addy is loveaholic145@hotmail.com or my yahoo is lil_mel93@yahoo.com

Awsome poem

Aww this is reallyy sad, but i like it a lot. and i can relate to it, as i cut too and hide my pain. but you did a wonderful job writing this. keep it up 5/5

Nice job, the emotions were strong and raw. One thing I will suggest is to use more imagery, flowery words and less fill words.

This is a other good one i give u a 5/5