I dream alone

by Danyellis   Sep 23, 2006


I wish i could have that dream again
the one when i wake up
it wont come back to me anymore
now that youre not here
did i ever wake up
am i still alive
or did i just drift away in sleep
i wish i could find someone who understands me
maybe i could live again

no ones here
no one but me
im alone
in a big world
am i lost
or am i found
in the sky
or on the ground
am i blind
can i hear
is someone with me
what do i fear
do i have clothes
or am i naked
am i new to this world
or just outdated
im alone
thats certain

nothing makes sense
not anymore
am i sitting in the sky
or just on the floor
i have no food
no home or any possession
is this what i deserve?
i have but one question

am i lost or am i found
in the sky or on the ground
am i blind, can i hear
is someone with me, what do i fear
do i have clothes, or am i naked
am i new to this world, or just outdated
can i dream again
or is this a dream in itself
am i a person or just a book on a shelf
whats my name
who are you
who am i

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  • 16 years ago

    by Danyellis

    Wow man. thanks :)
    i know it took me like two years to reply. thats kinda sad hahaha. i've written a lot more! thanks for the advice!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like the repitition of certain lines in this-it works well.I can really relate to this piece as I've been through similiar experiences/feelings.The flow is good.But it is the emotion and meaning that really stand out.We all feel lost and confused at times, but believe in yourself, retain the capacity to love and it will find you,hold on to your hopes and dreams.Sometimes going through rough periods makes us stronger.Rise above your mood, and be alive, ALIVE!

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

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