I like the repitition of certain lines in this-it works well.I can really relate to this piece as I've been through similiar experiences/feelings.The flow is good.But it is the emotion and meaning that really stand out.We all feel lost and confused at times, but believe in yourself, retain the capacity to love and it will find you,hold on to your hopes and dreams.Sometimes going through rough periods makes us stronger.Rise above your mood, and be alive, ALIVE!

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow man. thanks :)
i know it took me like two years to reply. thats kinda sad hahaha. i've written a lot more! thanks for the advice!!!