by Yulie Sep 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
These tears, |
by xo kisses xo
Awe! thats really good. i love it |
Good poem! I loved it! Very emotional! |
by Fay
I really like this poem but just one suggestion, this line "But all the pain, truth, and despair, lies inside with me". I think it would sound better if u had it as within me not with me, as it makes much more sense. But good job :) |