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  • I really like it
    i know how your feeling
    great way of expressing
    and totally from the heart
    keep it up
    xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Its great! I like the way its written and the flow of it. Nice! Well done and keep it up! xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    I really liked your title! It was eye catchy and made me want to read and see what this poem was about..thats always good!

    I like your style of writing as well..its like a free style, your just getting everything out and I like how it reads! This was excellently written..you showed your true emotions very well!
    Krissey

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Again Good Job! keep writing and i'll read every one. 5/5