Hell at last

by ErinMonsta   Sep 24, 2006


Yelling screaming
Hell at last
As we look into the past
Deafening the world
With evil eyes
We watch the world
Wonder in our eyes
Hatred burns
Our judgment clouds
Leaving a fog among the land
Blind
Blood and instinct now rule
Be it friend or foe
No one shall stand in thy way
Unsheathe your sword
Let the blood run
Leave no one alive
To hold your stride
Defend your honor and defend it true
For no one will live to defend you
As you watch the last man fall
Red devilsh eyes of yours
Instill the fear in them all
Black scales ripple upon your skin
Let you slither from the battle field
Now return to the present
Guilt creeps in
Of how many hawks you killed
To avenge that which no blood will quench
You now live in nethier heaven nor hell
Because a secret battle creeps near
All know that the war still wages
But now its silent
Two cultures
Different in everyway
Now forced together after lifetimes of war
You close your eyes
And wish for peace
Finally a chance to fix what was broken
Broken by the falcon queen
Truth comes to light
That the war will never cease

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  • 17 years ago

    by MR F

    Why didn't you tell me you could write such poetry?!

  • 17 years ago

    by MR F

    Why didn't you tell me you could write such poetry?!

  • 18 years ago

    by MR F

    Did you write that? if you did, it's cool. if you didn't, SHAME ON YOU.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow, i realy like it. =)

    favourite lines:

    "Defend your honor and defend it true
    For no one will live to defend you
    As you watch the last man fall
    Red devilsh eyes of yours
    Instill the fear in them all
    Black scales ripple upon your skin
    Let you slither from the battle field"

    touching, poignant, wonderful for an 11 yr old. =P

    keep writing, u have potential,
    xxx

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