LMAO!! This is hallarious!! Great! I like English though... 5/5 keep writing!

Lol wow thts wat engilsh is bout with words and meaning but this poem makes me laugh a lil good job! keep on writing!

Ur a great writer but this poem is not nearly as good as the ones you wrote b4

Haha thats hilarious...5/5 =)

LOL! That was kinda cute.. I think it should be in the fun && humor section though, it seems better suited.. The flow was pretty good, some of the lines were a little too long to really fit very well.. The language could be improved, but then it is a funny poem and it doesnt really have to be.. Nice job 4/5

This poem offends me. I cannot stand when people use 'gay' as an insult. Although I am not gay, many of my close friends, and I truly believe 'gay' represents a way of life, and should not be used as an insult.

This poem actually isn't written badly. It's got good flow and rhythm, but I'm not going to rate it because I don't think that'd be fair.

Funny, just like my teacher^_^
anyway great job