Laughable Lesion

by Taylor Porton   Mar 12, 2004


Do you want to stab at my heart
Watching closely as I bleed?
This pain, it hurts when we're apart
But the pain is like a need
Or a hunger I must feed
I'd rather starve

Cutting like a thousand knives
You laugh."Who cares?" you say.
But the pain, I fear to tell you
Is hurting worse today.

But you keep on laughing, and I fight
to free myself of you
Then soon, my worst fear has arrived
And I start laughing too

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  • 19 years ago

    by Matters

    Nice job. Smile...? I really liked it ever though it was sad.. Sad poems are easier to relate to I think. Anyways, it's an acrostic because that's what that style poetry is called. I think? Full points on this one, and thanks for the comments.

  • 20 years ago

    by nichole

    i loved it SOOOO much!! keep writing!!

  • 20 years ago

    by kristen

    i LOVED that poem. those are the kinds of poems that i write too =)... so check out my poems if you want
    -- kristen

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