The pole

by Emm   Sep 24, 2006


The girls went out on the town,
Just to get some lunch,
In the car,
Not very far,
From the school who held a hunch,
Five best friends,
Having so much fun,
The music came to a stop,
They looked around,
And then the fun was done,
On the news,
They told the story,
Of four girls who died so young,
Only one had survived,
But the church bells still had rung,
She lost her legs,
And her four best friends,
To that light pole by the school,
Their lives were lost,
They were so cool.
Life is lost so young these days,
Taken advantage of by many teens,
Just to go back,
And change that day,
I'd give my life for many things,
Natasha was so special,
She was smart and bright and nice,
As that pole smashed the window,
She payed a great price,
Natasha was a good friend,
At graduation she was praised,
But driving so fast,
Was supposed to last,
If only four lives were phased,
God Bless those four lost souls,
And one who's so alone,
Pray for Natasha, a loving friend,
Her memory this poem has shown.

*Natasha was my cousin's best friend who died in a tragic crash. One girl didn't die. She had to have her legs amputated and she lived to tell the tragic story on the news. It was a famous story for many weeks. I write this poem to cherish the lives of those girls. They died a week before graduating high school. The song "Good Riddance" (By Green Day) was played at graduation because it was Natasha's all time favorite song.
I met her a few times. She was very nice. If only someone was there to tell those girls to slow down.........

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emm

    Ok, i will change 4 to four. and ill try to make it flow easier. thank you for the critique.

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I like this one, but maybe you could work on the flow of it a little bit. It kind of seems like some of the thoughts are just lines that aren't entirely related strung together in poetic form. Keep up the good work though! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    Umm im agree with tammie and shadowspoet only i see the number 4 and how if you try to make it a word not a symbol or instead of 4 make it four

    but then this is a sad and great poem

    geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Absolutely beautiful sad poem you penned here, sorry for your lost, my thought, myprayer goes out to her family...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Thats extremely sad. I'm sorry for your loss. You wrote this poem so well for such a sad event. Pure emotion and sadness was expressed clearly. Nice write. Keep your head high. =]