Synthetic

by Natalie   Sep 24, 2006


Intense emotions conceal all truth,
Alleging nothing hurts deep inside,
Tattered words linger beyond ears,
Ignoring sounds of crashing tears.

Cold chills travel up anemic spines,
Begging for forgiveness once again,
Sharp stabbing engulfs paper heart,
Memories playback from the start.

Solitude thoughts become unheard,
(Don't touch me, I'm not worth it),
Lost within a synthetic personality,
Vanishing physically and mentally.

24th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    A second and equally amazing piece of writing. It is rare to come across an author with so much foundation to build on - you Must write more!!

    Neil.

  • 17 years ago

    by Illusion

    I absolutely love this poem
    The words just flow together
    It's beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Amazing . This is a fine piece of work .
    It`s deep and it`s powerful .
    I think I`m becoming yher fan now . haha
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

    BTW Thank yu for yher comment (:

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow. wonderful job. you have such amazing talent. i loved the words you used. and this poem was so deep.

    wow. your soo great at writing. its not
    fair.

    -oh and you had a lot more poems before, what happened to them?

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. I liked how you put in the emotional and the mental struggles in this piece. I thought it was well written, with really good descriptions, and I felt like I knew everything that was happening. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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