Comments : Synthetic

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, it was good sweetie.. As usual, it's one of your poems that you have to read a few times before you understand lol.. Or at least i do.. =P The vocabulary you used was very advanced and the flow was good.. Nicely done sweetie! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    What do you mean you can't write anything good you an amazing poet

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    How could you say that you don't write good poetry? I really like this poem a lot, you are quite talented! Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more of your poems!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    This is really good...I don't know why you don't think so...Keep it up...

    much Love x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Nat this wasn't a terrible poem. I would suggest taking out the her to keep it flowing good because the her just seems to cheapen the effect and your poetry is too good for that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow Nat, that was awesome. There was so much intensity in that poem, as well as mixed emotions. You seem to be enjoying this style of poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    "Tattered words linger beyond ears,
    Ignoring sounds of crashing tears."...
    Perfect!
    On pensive notes you write a marvelous poem that leaves me a lot of questions..
    Good very Good!
    5/5

    God Bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    That was a great read natalie! i truly admire your talent and i love the way you write
    your poems leave me with questions and often i have to read them a few times just incase i missed something, and that makes for a fantastic read, great work again natalie!!!

    xoxo Lucy

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow........this poem....is just....there is no words to descibe it since its sooo awsome!! i liked it alot!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Talee --
    Hey babes!! Haven`t seen you around much -- maybe thats because I haven`t been around much either. How are you doing? Hopefully okay. I haven`t posted anything within the past two months ;; I`m soo busy working on my book and between school and cheerleading - things are getting pretty hectic. That`s basically what`s going on with me. Now back to your poem..
    It was terrific =D I love your vocabulary span ;; it really makes people take you more seriously knowing you`re intelligent. It was beautifully written. Keep this up, doll.
    5/5
    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Excellent word usage, so deep and powerful. I loved how the third and forth lines of each stanza rhymed, that was very unique. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Excellent word usage, so deep and powerful. I loved how the third and forth lines of each stanza rhymed, that was very unique. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Natalie,
    You have described excatly how I feel now-a-days. So you know that I speak the truth when I say that this is a magnificent poem. You have given such a wonderful discription of whats in the heart of a lot of people. You chose such excellent wording also. It's hard for me to comment the way I normally would because you have put the words that are in my heart down on paper. I tried but I couldn't do it myself. Thank you for sharing this wonderful, brilliant, masterpiece with me and others like myself. 5/5

    Hugs
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Very well written and strcutred. very well detailed and touching. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, i love the whole idea of that poem. Wonderfully written, you truely have some great talent there hun! Keep it up, and i'll definately keep reading. Very well done. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, i love the whole idea of that poem. Wonderfully written, you truely have some great talent there hun! Keep it up, and i'll definately keep reading. Very well done. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    Good poem (lol just doing that to piss u off!! hehe)

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Wow. I liked how you put in the emotional and the mental struggles in this piece. I thought it was well written, with really good descriptions, and I felt like I knew everything that was happening. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow. wonderful job. you have such amazing talent. i loved the words you used. and this poem was so deep.

    wow. your soo great at writing. its not
    fair.

    -oh and you had a lot more poems before, what happened to them?

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Amazing . This is a fine piece of work .
    It`s deep and it`s powerful .
    I think I`m becoming yher fan now . haha
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

    BTW Thank yu for yher comment (: