I liked how you kinda kept it hanging, cause you never REALLY say wether or not you choose her. And I liked how you wanted to stay loyal to your friend even though he doesn't "own" her you still want to respect his wants ( just like your own ). Great job!
~Jules

I really like this one! you have a very cute way of writting! i love your style! I like this poem and think you did a good job on it, I will be giving you a 5/5 on this.