I like this. You did a great job sweetie. Your descriptions were written very nicely, and i could imagine everything you were writing about. Another fantastic write from a very talented poet. Keep up the great work. I always look forward to reading your poems. Thanks for all of your comments, i appreciate them alot. =] 5/5

Very good poem, I really enjoy reading it.......NJ

Wow Cj, Excellent poem! :]

Your tears will freeze
Your breath will be short
No winter’s breeze
Will come with ease.

It made me feel like I was there.
Lol :P

LOVE IT!!

CassAnDruh

Great writing not many people can make you feel like your in the poem but you did gr8 writing x

Great poem it flowed nicely and had good rhymming
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace

WOW Your poem was amazing I thought you did really great writing it Well done =) 5/5