To sum it up in a word ; Beautiful.

This is a beautiful poem. 5/5. ur talented. well done. keep writing. =)

Really beautifully written. Honest and sweet. Great way in which you grab your readers attention.

Godbless
Sammib

This was a rele great poem....keep it up...u rock ;)

:)
what a touching poem, I feel like I am watching everything, perfect.

The feeling of love can be felt in this write and then the sense of lost at the end. Wonderfully and beautifully pinned.

sadaddy

I loved this. I could feel the adrenaline and the wanting. Amazing. Keep it up. :)

So many times ive been there in that poem, i wish i could write more in depthly about my sexuality but fear people will be nasty and small minded. if you wanna chat contact me through my profile xx keep it up.
gay pride 2007 x

I love your poem well written and meaningful Steve