So very true...i liked this poem a lot...you wrote it well..and the flow was perfect! the whole poem was awesome! and i loved it!
Keep It uP!
And
Keep Smiling!

Love
-*-Tormented

Short, Simple n Good
Great poem
very True
Suggestion
maybe a little longer
U can do more then that
i know u can
great job thogh
5/5
~MF~

Aww that's really sweet, and puts a great message across for a short poem.. beautifully written as always :] 5/5 xx