by Jessica Sep 24, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Following you slowly through each and every life |
Congrats on your 3rd place win in the Erotic contest this poem is excellent and very true |
by Maiya
This is great! I love that you chose to do a different kind of poem & you strayed away from the typical. This is very creative of you great job hun! :) |
by Jenni Marie
I've never come across this type of poem before, but i ejoyed it. |
by LadyPearl
Very poetic. Great intricate details, very tranquil feeling. Terrific write overall. I loved the second line, very true. |