Very poetic. Great intricate details, very tranquil feeling. Terrific write overall. I loved the second line, very true.

I've never come across this type of poem before, but i ejoyed it.

This is great! I love that you chose to do a different kind of poem & you strayed away from the typical. This is very creative of you great job hun! :)

Congrats on your 3rd place win in the Erotic contest this poem is excellent and very true