My letter of Apology

Wow such an intense poem. Sounds like its directed to an ex boyfriend not a current one. I know that we've all been there though loving someone even when you know that you shouldn't. The heart wants what it wants and it's hard to tell it otherwise, even if your head knows better. I really liked how you repeated "I'm Sorry" at the beginning of most of the lines. It made them very powerful and I could feel the trueness of each phrase. I think that my favourite part of this poem was the last stanza, because it shows that you know that you deserve better and that's very good to hear. I also liked it because I showed the anger and the sadness all combined into one stanza. The only thing that I can critique you on is make sure that your I's are all capitalized. Nice work. And I agree with Bridgete it sounds like its directed to an ex-boyfriend not a current one. Ditch him and find someone who treats you right, you deserve it.

Such emotion. Why is it that we always suffer at the hand of bastards?

Josie

I can feel all the emtions you put into this poem. I liked this the best of all so far. I can really relate. You did a wonderful job. Once again 5/5

Great poem except for the repetition of " I'm sorry" was a little to much. Other then that it was a great poem:) 4/5

Wow.. this poem reminds me so much of my ex-boyfriend. I know exactly how you feel. You portrayed your emotions very well and I loved all of it! I hope everything works out for you! Amazing job on this! 5/5