Love yet not love

by Corruption   Sep 24, 2006


I� ve got a question
something many people ask
have you ever been in love
have u ever felt addicted to someone

did you get the feeling
that you cant live without her
that when she left you would die
that when she came back you were whole

did you ever get a false feeling
one about someone you thought u loved
that you were meant to be
that she is your soul mate

but then one day the feeling disappeared
and left you alone and friendless
you had put everything into that relationship
and when it has done you had no one

you turned paranoid
felt like you were ugly
thought everyone hated you
and just wanted to vanish

this is how I feel
my life is meaningless
but I don�t ever want to see her again
she is the one who made me this

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  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Life is never meaningless. You see yourself as you want to be. I'm going through something like this now.

    Oh and nice poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by catgirl101

    This is sad and the rilly sad thing is i have done this to guy befor but then i found out he had cheeted on me then i didnt feel so bad but now were not friends

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great poem , very greatly written and yeah, welcome to our club,
    have a great time and 5/5 from me.

  • 18 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Yep! i have felt that way...many times..not just once...lol..o well...thats life..you gotta face it! be strong keenan..
    hmm the poem..saw only one critique:
    that you were met to be
    {That you were MEANT to be}
    Anyway i liked the poem very much...liked the emotion..the flow..everything in general..so yeh..great job! keep it up and i hope everything gets better 4 ya.. you're great and if tht girl ddnt see it then she's not worth it! The right one will come along sometime...lol..like you said everyone has a princess/prince...so yeh Take Care
    And
    Keep SMiling :)

    ~D*K~

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