Exhausted

by Goth marionette   Sep 24, 2006


My soul is so cold
and I seem so old
even my spiritual thoughts
are injured by the love of yours

I am tired of vain pretense
that someday I may get a chance
the candle of love was chided
and in the castle of sand was clouded

I can't even deviate and go alone
pain is scraped in the pale dawn
and in the land of misery, I am lost
for memories that never die as a chasing ghost

It shows me the shaded life of solitude
to cut my heart while I am just mute
I feel only screams and struggles inside
my innocent face finally turned into wild

My eyes of bloody tears scream
like an elder river hardly stream
just exhausted like no time before
I fall and can't see the light anymore

My strength is plucked out of me
I am someone else but the one I'd be
I can't get myself out of this cocoon
and in the end I'm too exhausted to go on

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow this was so deep and like all of your poems so uniquely beautiful and powerful. there is never a time that i have read your poems and have not been left speechless by the amazing impact!!! i loved it, keep up the beautiful work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    This poem is really deep. It has a lot of meaning, and great feeling. It's great. =]

    And thanks for the comment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Paul London

    Excellent work. I loved the poingancy of it. You made your point and great use of metaphors. I am waiting on another collaboration from you and T J. I want to read part two of "Our Dark Ecstasy" LOL keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Gr8 work expressing ur feelings..i totally felt u that i got a little exhausted at the end :D..ofcourse keep writng..and keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude very powerful in the heart love this poem (^_^) 10 /5 you really have a wonderful talent (^_^)

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