Shaima22222222!!!!!!
this is really gggggggggrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaaatttttttt! LoL
la bgad this is absolutely fantastic...you know I love your poems SO SO much
sorry its been kinda late...kol sana wenty tayebaaaa! yarab t2ady the most wonderful Eid ;)

keep that up sweetie
G'luck
Your sister
NemO xxxxxxx

Good choice of words, really emotional. Great work.

The words used here is superb. 5/5

Very very beautiful i loved it.

Great write..

"It shows me the shaded life of solitude
to cut my heart while I am just mute
I feel only screams and struggles inside
my innocent face finally turned into wild"

^^so much emotions are hidden in those words..

"My eyes of bloody tears scream
like an elder river hardly stream
just exhausted like no time before
I fall and can't see the light anymore"

^^again beautifully expressed.. very powerful write..

Excellent..

Nice!

Good job...this is so 5/5

Oh my god
The best poem I ever came across of. I truly admire you for this great job

What a ravishing, wonderful, yet sorrowfully sad poem. Keep up the good work. Honest Luck

Sarah

Dude very powerful in the heart love this poem (^_^) 10 /5 you really have a wonderful talent (^_^)

Gr8 work expressing ur feelings..i totally felt u that i got a little exhausted at the end :D..ofcourse keep writng..and keep it up!!

Excellent work. I loved the poingancy of it. You made your point and great use of metaphors. I am waiting on another collaboration from you and T J. I want to read part two of "Our Dark Ecstasy" LOL keep up the good work

This poem is really deep. It has a lot of meaning, and great feeling. It's great. =]

And thanks for the comment.

Wow this was so deep and like all of your poems so uniquely beautiful and powerful. there is never a time that i have read your poems and have not been left speechless by the amazing impact!!! i loved it, keep up the beautiful work!!!