Struck Her To Her Misery

by Sarah Ann   Sep 24, 2006


Ignoring every single plea
He struck her to her misery
She toppled over to the ground
Another blow; deafening sound

His anger stirred up larger rage
With mind in chaos, heart in plague
By filthy words of dire disgust
He forced her to relieve his lust

We are both victims to his guile
Each torn apart beneath a smile
And in her eyes I see the fear
I've covered up and felt for years

((I know it's short, and it probably seems incomplete, but it's not. I just wrote it based on true events. It's more painful to write than it seems here. Sorry, I just couldn't portray strong emotion.))

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kathrynn

    Amazing poem.... I know the feelings. And, I agree- it's so hard to write about those situations.. It hurts too much.
    5/5 for sure
    Congrats on making it that far- you're work is incredible.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem...small but got strong emotions. u should continue it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by 1

    Simply beautiful. tis poem does protrays stron emotions. i luv it.
    *5/5*

    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This is brilliant- and its feeling of being incomplete only adds to this.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by sami

    Omg its awsome i like ur poetry it unleashes tru meanings and its not poser poetry