Under the Moonlight

by LadyPearl   Sep 24, 2006


Hidden behind the lace of moonlight
Where faces are tainted in forbidding lost
I run around in circles over and over
Hoping to cover all my losing cost

They don't know how the rain sings my name
They don't know how the dark kisses my heart
All they see is a mirror, an obscene clone
With enough smiles to play her part

All I need, is some truth, some love from high up
Some strength to start up my engine again
To brace myself against the falling steps
Some hopeful omen to tell me when

Where can I hide my mourning confusion
Where scorching torches cannot embrace
The fact my soul is tearing piece by piece
And my smile dangling in a pitiful grace

They don't know the chains around my mind
They don't know how I wander alone at night
But the moonlight knows every step I take
Closer to the awakening dark delight

*I'll return favors

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow amazing ryme, very good imagry and emotion. the flow was flawless and the poem, absolutely beautiful :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

    PS. Plz vote and comment on some of my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    I liked this piece because the rhyme is sounds really natural and unforced. The atmosphere is very strong in this piece also, I felt you protrayed your feelings really well and sincerely here.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Awww thats defiently a 5/5, I just loved this poem how you peiced the sentence together like this one "They don't know how the rain sings my name
    They don't know how the dark kisses my heart"... Very awesome job...

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I liked all the emotion, and the depth you went into talking about such small things. No fixes needed here. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha