by LadyPearl Sep 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Hidden behind the lace of moonlight |
by HvN
Wow amazing ryme, very good imagry and emotion. the flow was flawless and the poem, absolutely beautiful :] |
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5. |
by Ariana
I liked this piece because the rhyme is sounds really natural and unforced. The atmosphere is very strong in this piece also, I felt you protrayed your feelings really well and sincerely here. |
by Karma Hope
Awww thats defiently a 5/5, I just loved this poem how you peiced the sentence together like this one "They don't know how the rain sings my name |
I liked all the emotion, and the depth you went into talking about such small things. No fixes needed here. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo |