Wow I think this is a great poem. I really like the last line.

This poem is really good. I feel a lot of emotions coming from it.

Beautiful. Very beautiful. I luv it. *5/5*. Luv it.

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Hey! Awesome poem! It's a 5/5 for sure! Great work!!! Keep it up . . .
*Just Lisa*

I like i like

This is another well written poem!!!
wow i dont know what else to say!!!!
umm... the flow was good... the words u used were great.... the whole poem was awsome!

Keep it up!

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I liked all the emotion, and the depth you went into talking about such small things. No fixes needed here. =) Great job. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awww thats defiently a 5/5, I just loved this poem how you peiced the sentence together like this one "They don't know how the rain sings my name
They don't know how the dark kisses my heart"... Very awesome job...

I liked this piece because the rhyme is sounds really natural and unforced. The atmosphere is very strong in this piece also, I felt you protrayed your feelings really well and sincerely here.

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

PS. Plz vote and comment on some of my poems.

Wow amazing ryme, very good imagry and emotion. the flow was flawless and the poem, absolutely beautiful :]