Good poem little sis keep up the good work.

"then an other walks across the room just to say high to you"

'Another' is all one word.

There were quite a few mistakes here, and it didn't flow as well as it could have. However the vocabulary and rhyming was really good.

Too short! sorry but your poems could pass as quotes. Some lengths vary but if you have something to say you should say it depending on the form. Quotes are typically short, poems are at a wide range of lengths and all of yours are - too short. Im sorry I havent been as nice as I should. Today hasnt been good. Like I said I like WHAT you have to say just not HOW you say it.