I love this poem, it's really good. and i can relate so much to what you are saying. this poem is awesome. shanik

Great work! Thank you for reading my poetry. Ill read more of yours later. Im in class now and should be paying attention.

Thank you for your comment about my school shooting poem. Im working on a part two. In the first their are a lot of questions. In part 2 they will be answered. When i wrote the first part i based it off the first news reports that came out the day of the shooting. They had no reasons for why the man did it. So when i read later reports, which gave reasons (or answers), i realized i could either delete the first and write a new one or write a sequel answering my or our questions about why the man did it. I should have it done tommorow or the next day, i hope. I dont know if you have read the latest reports about the case, but ill warn you that it only makes it worse and a lot more sad, and especially sickening. Let me know what you think.

Great poem! There is sooo much emotion in it----amazing....There are some grammatical errors and at some points the flow is a little choppy, but for the most part, it's perfect! Keep it up and Stay Strong!!!

Great work! i realli enjoyed this poem ... keep up th good work...
im sorri to hear about tht pain u go thru...
kitty xoxox
be strong...

Omg that is soo sad! it reminds of whats goin on with my friend! none the less AWESOME POEM!

Sounds like my family. Sadly.
5 for excellent!