Perfect...

Aww. It's ok. You shouldn't have to feel like you need to be perfect for someone else. Don't change cuz someone wants you to be that way. Then you would be a fake. No one likes a fake. =)

Didn't you say no one [isn't] perfect..

^^It should be 'is'. The way you have it is a double negative. ^_^ Yay me. Lol. I liked how you put in the short lines in between the stanzas, then changed it at the end. Very original style, and a well written poem. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow gurl this is great and i can totaly relate

I like this, i think it means if you try to make some-one perfect, it'll turn into the perfect suicide! after all i you are truly perfect, what is there to live for?

Every-one is perfect!

'tis was a good read.Your style of writing is good.I know many out there can realate to this one, and I'm one of those for sure.
5/5

This is a very well wriiten sad poem! sad emotions and very deep i loved it keep it up!