OMG! I love this poem so much! great job!

This is a very well wriiten sad poem! sad emotions and very deep i loved it keep it up!

'tis was a good read.Your style of writing is good.I know many out there can realate to this one, and I'm one of those for sure.
5/5

I like this, i think it means if you try to make some-one perfect, it'll turn into the perfect suicide! after all i you are truly perfect, what is there to live for?

Every-one is perfect!

Wow gurl this is great and i can totaly relate

Aww. It's ok. You shouldn't have to feel like you need to be perfect for someone else. Don't change cuz someone wants you to be that way. Then you would be a fake. No one likes a fake. =)

Didn't you say no one [isn't] perfect..

^^It should be 'is'. The way you have it is a double negative. ^_^ Yay me. Lol. I liked how you put in the short lines in between the stanzas, then changed it at the end. Very original style, and a well written poem. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha