Sweet Whispers

Hmm...I didn't know exactly what you were getting at for this one, but again, it reminded me of war and people fighting. It mainly gave me the idea that we have everything, but not everything that we have is good and we strive to make it perfect. That's just what I got out of it. =P

The flow was good for the most part. I really liked the flow to the first stanza, but then it started to get choppy and didn't flow much after that. But I still liked it. =P Great write. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, I LOVED this. It really shows what the world is like today, and it is sad. Absolutely beautiful, great work darling.

--steph

Wow this is an excellent poem, and every word you wrote down is so true, things just keep getting worse and worse, excellent write 5/5

Wonderfully written. The honesty within the poem leaves a huge impact on the reader and definitely leaves them with something to think about. I really liked this piece. You seemed to capture everything that the world is going through and write it down so beautifully and truthfully. The flow was really good too and held up very well, as did the rhyming. Great job on this! 5/5

This one reminds me of something i wrote but havnt put up yet its soo good! i luv it haha keep writing and if u can, im not sure if u can havnt used this site for long, but if u can send me a few of the ones uv written i luv reading ur stuff :D