Wow. This is a great poem. You expressed here how brave you are for not only your friends but yourself. You did a very good job. I know how you feel. We all have to be strong for someone. Even if it isn't ourselves.
P.S. Thanx for the comments.

Wow great way of expressing your seelf and great poem just improve the flow and the structure of the poem and it will became better

geneross

Wow.. that was amazing.. keep up the great work.. thanks for commenting on mine, means a lot.... keep it up girl

Okay, now THiS was good .

I don't care what happens to me,
Or care if I will even see another day,
I never look forward to what could be,
`I love those lines . I know a lot of people can relate to that & I shure did .

Overall, that was nice . I didn`t expect it to be this topic that you chose to write about , but you did an awesome job with it .
..__MiNDYY

Why am I here, = Why am I here(*?)
Why was I even born, = Why was I even born(*?)
offer anyone, = offer anyone(*.)
I cant let any = I can't let any
sanity, = sanity(*.)
I cant let them know = I can't let them know

Another well written poem, although this hit home quite well, better than the last one I read. I enjoyed this one, and it was made up of mostly one word: penetrate(S). I love that word, and your use of that word in this poem inspired me =] SO, I am making a ONE WORD contest now =] Thanks to your inspiration.

Well written
5/5
~Stephen White