I totally agree! I know what u mean..
well anyways it was a good poem w/o a doubt. Keep it up!

There is something incredibly painful when it all catches you off guard, you really captured everything : ) great poem, full of pain but yet hopeful. keep it up!!
sad songs and hopeful smiles,
jess x

Thats amazing. I loved it

Very deep poem. Being inlove make us have all the good and bad of it.
keep up the good job and hope you put a smile on that face.

Great poem. You can fel the passion. I can totally relate. So true.... sometimes does hurt. Great job. If u get a chance check out my poem and quotes.
keani loves koa