Hey you improve so fast and you are now a good poet and nice acrostic poem i love the message and just a few thing lols i cant understand the last second line or maybe im just that poor on understanding but by the way great poem

Geneross

Very nicely done. :) ..I'm not too good at Acrostics so you've done a great job in my opinion! Very warming & heartfelt too. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Acrostic poem well, its great for me to read your new poem. and i believe u write more and i have the strong feeling that u are very inpired coz u can write a lot of poem and they are great. job well done so keep it up 5/5

GOD BLESS U ALWAYS kabs...

Thats really cute and very well written It was a pleasure to read
5/5

Well written with a lot of feeling. truly from the soul. A definite 5.
Check out mine and let me know what you think.

Simply beautiuful acrostic poem you penned here, lovely yet so heartfelt write...well done myfriend..take care!

Very nicely done!!!

Wow!..This is very deep and it's lovely
You have me in aww right now. This
was beautifully penned. I know I've
already told you this but your poetry
is just so amazing. I loved this poem
and don't be surprise if you find another comment later from me for
this poem. lol. Keep up the excellent
work. You give true meaning to the
word poet. 5/5
Love
Letty

Omg. This was great. I mean it was amazing. Like..I have no words. That doesn't happen often either.

Love this style. Great topic. It was clear and well-organized. Usually I prefer acoustics with none to little reference about people or fill words. Keep it up

Oh i really like this. Acrostic's can be very hard, but you made it look easy. A wonderful job. The first two lines sucked me in alot. Fantastic write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Absolutely beautiful. Perhaps one of my favorite love poems.. And I usually say people cannot write love poems for it is hard to explain love. But you did it so gracefully...and your word choice was perfect and amazing. A thousand times, beautiful job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Hmm...I don't usually like Acrostics, but I really did like this one a lot. It had a lot more than just words thrown together to make an 'Acrostic' poem. A lot of people, in my opinion, can't write an Acrostic without it not making any sense. Great job. I really liked it! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is a very sweet poem. I loved this. You had great word usage and really expressed your emotions well. I like the title of this, it's unique. But you did a great job on this. Keep it up! 5/5

Very well done! acrostic poetry is very hard to write.< in my opinion>, and you made it look easy!

I like this

Its really sweet~ ^-^

5/5. Great poem!

Aww this is really beautiful! and it was different, great job! you really do have talent. amazing job with this. keep it up

Amazing peace of work!
you got the talent... your poems are very good!