Whoa i know how it feels and i felt the emotion you want to convey in your poem....it was really sad and painfeul...GREAT JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

...sorry i mean painful...

This is very emotional. i like it. i felt the same way and it hurts like crazy! but this is very intense in a good way and i love it. write some more poems! id love to read them =]

xo,
Beth