I didn't really like this, the flow was every where. it was an acrostic (it would have been easier to put that in the title instead of at the bottom of the poem) i don't know, the words you used were to simple. just one thing when you have a lot ideas in your head, write them down seperatly, i got a bit confused staying with the idea of the poem, but thats just my opinion. 4/5

I WAS GOING TO SAY ALMOST THE EXACT THING AS NIKKI