My Silent Death

by Brokenxx [aka Alex]   Sep 25, 2006


Im choking in a thick cloud-prison of despair,
Yet no one can see me drowning,
Surrounded by the ones who are suppose to care,
But I dont even see them frowning.

Im sinking deeper yet, into a bottomless abyss,
Gasping desperately for some much needed fresh air,
Yet I am denied this one simple wish,
And my soul remains stripped and bare.

Im fading now, slowly and painfully yet still way too fast,
Why can no one can hear my tormented cries,
They dont understand that this breath could very well be my last,
And Im losing the will to soldier on, maybe I dont want to rise.

Im dying internally yet silently, that much is clear,
The screams and the blood remain unheard and unseen,
But still, even if you could, would you choose to hear?
Or just simply muffle another of my silent screams.

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I think it speaks for itself.

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  • 17 years ago

    by grim

    Vivid and a mind stopper. great poem. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    You have so much talent, i love all your poems especially this one- it is so deep and true to the core... you have obviously been through a lot and this is so very well expressed in your work. 5 as always xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    Hey Alex. This is really good. Perfect description of being ignored.

    Love It

    Love Niquee

    (p.s. don't need to worry if you've only started writing a little while ago. Things just come to you. It doesn't always depend on length in the buisness. Your in my favourites now :) )