by .:*Br!tt@ny*:. Sep 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I wish I could've been there to hold you precious face, to tell you that I loved you as you slipped from this life to grace. Gosh I really loved you thats all there is to say, don't worry though I wont forget you, I'll think of you night and day. I wish I wish I could've been there to tell you how I felt, I wanted you to know that you made my heart melt. I hate it had to end like this but I have to say goodbye, I wish I could've been there on the night you had to die. |
by Tammi
Once again love it and I lost a great man I loved 18 yrs ago and I was not there to say goodbye so way does this poem make me think of him great work 5/5 |
Loved it it was great well expressed :):)keep it up and ill keep reading plz r/r/c on some of my stuff please thnx xxx alex xxx |
Well written, lots of feeling. |